The Ghost of You - Comments

@Shotgun Spirit

You're really doing great with your realism. Thanks to your mum for her service! My brother isn't stationed anywhere at the moment, but he's a Marine and will most likely be doing some embassy guarding.

@Killjosmakesomenoise


haha, thank you. We plan to.

@HerGraceKilljoyRainbow


oh my gosh, thank you so much. We're trying to keep it as real as humanly possible and since my mom is an active duty soldier, I have a little experience with the trauma and worry of war.

Ugh, did my comment not post? I'm going to say it again, just in case: this is nothing short of remarkable. Due to the fact that I have a personal connection, I love a good war story, and you've done something here that literally almost no one does with this sort of thing. It's not just a romance; within but a chapter you've captured the reality of it.

It's great plz continue