My Honest Observation

It was raining that night…

(Time lapse of 3 days, Ray's POV)

I wake up in a hospital bed, completely baffled. What happened? Where am I? I look the around the egg shell white room, I see two chairs and the door. I don't bother to look any where else. My nose curls up at the aroma of bleach, sterilization and… death. I curl into bed as I struggle to breathe. Where is Lauren?!?! A doctor comes into the room, "Hello, Mr. Toro, how are you feeling?" How am I feeling?!?! Really?!?! All I could say was, "What happened?! Where's Lauren?!" I get quite frantic when he doesn't tell me right away. He opens his mouth and closes it, "Well… a drunk driver collided your car with their own. Unfortunately, it happened to be on her side. She's suffering from a concussion, a broken arm, fractured ankle, and a broken wrist." He shakes his head and presses on. "Those, are her major injuries. She has a few scrapes and such, but she's currently in a coma. We predict it will be short term. And as for you, you are lucky. You only have a broken nose and a few cracked ribs. A few guys are outside waiting for you. Can they come in?" After hearing news, I can't think straight. I nod and the doctor ushers them in. Mikey, Bob, Gerard and Frank come in. "Hey Ray… how are you doing…?" They ask, testing the boundaries. "Uh… I guess I'm okay…" I shrug. Bob steps forward as Frank and Mikey take a seat. "Have you seen Lauren at all? She ran away last night. I can't find her." He asked, desperately. I look at my lap. "She was with me…" I say, shamefully. "WHAT?!?! What room?!?!" I shrug as Bob rushes out to the doctors.
(Time lapse to Bryar home)
(Bob POV)
we carry Lauren's stuff to her room, her phone on the top of the pile goes off. Mikey picks it up and reads the message:
Matt: Lauren?! Where the fuck are you?! What the hell, you bitch?! Pick up!
there were 19 missed calls from this guy. Who is it? We must find him.

Notes

Sorry for the cliffhanger, just wanted to keep you interested. Is it good so far?