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Zero Percent

So Does Mine

"Are you almost done, I'm hungry and I would like to eat something." He said sounding board.

"Your a monster!" I yelled, finding my voice, "I am not your daughter, and I will never do anything to please you!" I screamed at him. He looked pretty shocked that I stood up to him.

"Tabitha please control yourself. My plan involves your cooperation, and I would really rather not use my backup place, which will cause you much pain.

"So does mine." I said before shooting him in the shoulder, he yelled in pain before he fell out of his chair.

I wasted no time running to the other side of his desk getting a better view of him. He was clutching his shoulder and his eyes were tainted in anger and hate. I aimed again and shot his foot. I was just about to aim again at his stomach when he swung his legs around and tripped me.

I fell back and my head landed on his concrete floor. I fell and I was dizzy, I knew this wasn't a good sign, Korse didn't wast any time crawling on top of me and throwing a quick punch to my more and another 2 to my stomach. He then grabbed a fist full of my hair and pulled on it making my head leave the ground and earning a scream in pain from me. He started to slam my head against the floor, and by the fourth time, I could no longer feel any pain.

I knew I was bleeding though, I could fell blood on my body, I just didn't know where it was coming from.

"I told you my backup plan would cause you pain. Now, as I have said before, I am hungry and I would like some food. I'll send someone to assist you in about an hour."

I turned over so I wasn't facing him, I was facing my gun.

"Until then, I think you should sit here and think about what you did." I slowly reached out for my gun.

"Because your little attitude, I guess I will have to change my plans a bit." I could tell from the sound of his voice he wasnt facing me, if I was gonna do something, it had to be now.

I dont know how I did it, or how I got the strght to do it. But I pulled myself off the ground and aimed my gun at him and shot him in the back of his head. I saw his body collaspe after he was it, then I fell back onto the concrete floor and passed out in a pool of my own blood.

Notes

Hey guys ok so 2 things, 1) i know this probably sucked, I suck at action scene's, 2) I had a better version of this and when I hit submite it deleted itself......
Okay so tell me how I did or how bad this one is

Till next we meet my killjoys

Comments

I SAW IT COMING WHEN SHE GOT PREGNANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MEH4 MEH4
3/19/14
@threechemicaldays

haha your welcome!! I swear I'm smiling so much right now :)


@mylifesaved

I wasnt gonna do one so soon, but before I went to bed I got the idea, and I couldn't let it go to waste. And thank you :)
Blue_Moon72 Blue_Moon72
11/22/13
I freaking loved this story~so happy your doing a sequel!(:(:

your an amazing writer.
mylifesaved mylifesaved
11/22/13
my heart has just exploded with happiness!! thank you so much this is the best news ever now i have two stories by a perfect writer!! XD :D
@Killjoy96
:)
Blue_Moon72 Blue_Moon72
11/20/13