My Brutal Romance - Comments, page 2

This is the first MCR fan fic I ever read. I NEED TO KNOW HOW IT ENDS. (◣_◢) It's really good! Please update soon!

@Evileggy

YOU'RE SO MEAN D:

Okay c:

@SkeletonxCrew
Come on twitter faggit???

@MCRKilljoy



@zombie--

I'm sorry Dx I'll update soon.

Please, please, pleaseee update! I really look forward to it :3

I can't wait for the next updaaaate ._.
But I do like this story a lot.

Ahahaha frank xD

Oh this is just...wow please update

This is fantastic!!

I LOVE THIS SO FLUFFING MUCH!!!! :D <3

This is adorable and awesome. I just love this story. Cant wait for an update!

I love this story!!!

Brothers oath awww ♥

I'm loving this story so much! Hooked already!

@SkeletonxCrew @MayMayChan
Becausee I'm awesome actually.

Oh and we change tenses alot because I write in present and Skel writes in past :p

XOXO
-Evil

@MayMayChan
I'm glad you're enjoying it c:

I do Frank's POV because I enjoy the violence (and Jo looooves Gerard) and Evil is doing Gerard's POV.

chapter sizes aren't everything. sometime s you hust come to a good stopping point. you could keep going, combine a couple chapters, but it just sounds better not to. so don't get discouraged. its in the content, not the length. and your content is awesome! Though i would work on stabilizing your tense. you switch between past and present alot, but don't worry. i struggle with that too...but i'm rambling so...

wait, is one of you doing frank and the other gerard? cuz that is so cool

I love it!

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