Hold on Till May - Comments, page 5

@ijustreallymissmcrokay
Oh, it doesn't matter if I have to stay up late at night just to upload the story. So, I'll make big time for it.

@BuryYourHeart
OH BUT I WILL ALL THE COOKIES WILL BE MINE AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

im in love with your story, you have to find time? please? for me? ill give you virtual coffee!

@SmittenKitten
but-but I went camping.... don't steal my cookies...

Dude you really should update so soon other wise I will find you and when I do I will steal all your cookies and only give them back when you update :3

@hotmidnightstar
Try being the character. That's what I do.

@hotmidnightstar
Try being the character. That's what I do.

@BuryYourHeart I'm gonna have to try that. I'm working on something, but its....well not coming along as I hoped.

@hotmidnightstar
Sometimes researching random things on Google can be useful in stories. :)

Wow....just wow. Here I was thinking the symptoms were tied to her emotions, but damn.

@hotmidnightstar
It's okay to call it an illness 'cause it kind of is.

Wow, when you go to update a story, you don't mess around. I like them getting closer, and delving into each other's pasts. The trust is really building. As for Irmarie's (I don't want to call it illness) not feeling well, what's up with that. The manifestation of her feeling triggering anxiety, or something far more nefarious? Will be waiting for the next chappy.

I love the whole change of heart thing. Opening up someones previously narrow view. I'm also glad she kicked that dude in the nuts. Looking forward to the next update.