Near Morning - Comments, page 2

@FridayNightHigh
you're welcome lovely!

maybe Gerard could hit rock bottom without her, his alcohol addiction etc.
Revenge/Black Parade era, i suppose?

Victoria could be completely aware of Gerard. she never let him go, keeps tabs on his life in the public eye, calls Donna every now and then to find out how he is; without Gerard knowing.
His breakdown could affect her and she could get worse and worse, until she just wants to see him in person but incognito, so she goes to a concert but he doesn't see her.
She could be hiding from the world still, trying to sort her life out. you could incorporate parts of Pretty Woman I suppose?


I don't know, those are just random ideas. But I hope you do come up or across some inspiration, I'd love to see this progress. xx

@Morning Revolver
Thanks for subscribing! I really want to make this a full story and start adding chapters so I'm up to any ideas you have! I'm really not trying to go cliche with this so, just let me know what you think I should do!

This needs to be continued! please?

oh my, I'm hooked. p.s I've subscribed just in case! xx

I vote more chapters :) Yay I cant wait to read it!

@falloutlies
Oh! Thank you! I actually wrote the ending a lot different the first time, felt kinda bad, went back and changed it to where she didn't just leave the letter and leave for good! So glad you enjoyed it! Still trying to figure out if I want this to be just one chapter or an actual series of chapters. The next Cash Machine should make those heart pains subside!

Actually the whole thing was written well so...

No! It means that you wrote the "I'm not the girl you want part" well and it made me feel emotion :)

@falloutlies
Oh? Is this a bad thing?

D: Ouch. My heart hurts...