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Surrender The Night (Frerard) - Comments, page 2
Loving this fic, but spotted big mistake in ch 15... Frank asked for Gerard's address, and was uncomfortable about going into his teacher's house, but at the very beginning of the fic, that's just what he did, so he already knows the address.
I'm not picking holes, I just thought you should know if you hadn't realised.
I really do love this, and can't wait for more.
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Just found this fic and read alllll of it so I'm all caught up. Can't wait to see what you have next :)
8/14/16