"Let's Be Roommates" - Comments, page 2

I like the story, but the grammar is all over the place.
I'm not hating, I'm just a bit uptight about grammar :)

@daughter of the dead
Thank you so much, this means a lot to me. I will update soon.

MCR IS GETTING BACK TOGETHER OMG IF YOU DONT BELIEVE ME GO TO THEIR YOUTUBE AND LOOK AT THE VIDEO!!!!!!!! I CANT BREATHE

i really like it and i can't wait for the next chapter