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Looking good!

@Electric Siren
Thank you so much!!

Amazing.
original.
great visuals, I could see everything that was going on
i love the spiritual emphasis, as I am a devout Christian myself, you have me waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter.
Literally the only con crit I have for you is to watch your spelling. You had a few misspellings/homonyms that confused me (such as in the summery where you wrote 'through' where I think you Might've meant to write 'threw') but seriously other than that, this is one of the best fanfics a Ive seen in a while