Login
My high school romance - Comments
@misstrinity811
I am glad you like it. Thank you for the suggestion it is really helpful and I have gone back through my last 2 chapters and added paragraphs and I will continue to do so In later chapters I hope it is easier to read ^-^
I really like this so far :) I do have one suggestion though, can you put some spacing in your writing next time?
It really helps when reading a chapter, your eyes have a tendency to loose track of where you were any time you have to look away for even a second.
Wow, this is great! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
3/4/16