Bullet-Proof Heart - Comments, page 3

I think this is really good. It's like a soap opera (pretty sure I spelt it right but don't really care). I wouldn't watch them, but anyways, this like one. It's really good because you make the unexpected happen

Oh. My. Glob. Wow... Just wow.....

Alright I've been reading this story for awhile now and I have a few concerns and criticisms. If you don't take well to them, I'm very sorry.
First, the chapters are too short. It'd be alright if some of your chapters were the length that you're whole story is, but ALL of the chapters are too short. You can easily combine some of the chapters into one bigger chapter which would make more sense.
Second, this story isn't very realistic at all. The characters are way too dramatic with everything, and the doctors explaining to the character when she has cancer is VERY unrealistic. The whole dramaticness of suicide in this story is a bit over the top, too.

I'm sorry but this is just an honest criticism, and I'm also sorry if it offends you in anyway. This story seems very rushed, and I'm not understanding why people are saying it's so fantastic when there are major issues. This is only if you truly want to be a writer when you're older and if this is your passion. If it's not, then you don't have to take this to heart. I'm just telling you this because in the future, when you write stories and they're like this one, people will be a lot harsher.

This story is SSSSOOOOOOOO GOOD! It's really fantastic

Oh. Oh. Oh my god.

Thank you guys so much! It really means a lot to me! <3

That brought back memories and made me cry. But you have a gift.

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOO MUCH! IT MAKES ME CRY ALMOST EVERY SINGLE TIME THAT I FUCKING READ IT!!!!! I really love it. :)

This was really good ;~;

NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY THE FUCK WOULD YOU DO THIS?!?!?!?! IS THIS WHAT YOU WANT FROM US?!?!?!?! I JUST CAN'T HANDLE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;~;

WHAT THE FUCK?!?!?!?!?!?! I'M FUCKING SOBBING!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY SO FUCKING MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

seriously.. I was sobbing my eyes out.. I cried for like 10 mins about this... why you so good at the feels!?!?!

Im crying so hard you don't even understand

oh god frankie why?! *sobs*

I hope this story is teaching you all a lesson. Bullying in wrong, you never know how it will effect someone. One day you may see someone getting bullied and not know if its their last. Be nice to everyone...please?

You write fast

I'm so glad that you all like my story. I'm sorry if I'm messing with your feels. I just really like keeping you all on edge, but wait a bit longer and there may be the happy ending (for some people) that you were looking for.

omg !! plot twist much! I love this :D :D

WHY?!?!? THIS IS JUST SO NO!!!!!! I CAN'T HANDLE THIS!!! WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME?!?!?! *cries and flings self off of cliff*
I still like this... It just hurts... ;~;

Oh my God you are literally trying to destroy every emotion in my body aren't you