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Touch Him Again, And I'll Kill You - Comments, page 2
@Feather Edge
You know, you're actually really right. I think I get so carried away with actually moving the story along that I forget to really get into things. I'll definitely work on adding the small points in from now on. Thank you for bringing that to my attention!
So I forgot sleeping over reading this fic :D I really love your ideas and all the angst and idk I cried a lot *.* Thanks for writing this!
Sometimes I feel like some things happen to fast, though. I mean at some points in the story i felt like how they acted was a little bit implausible but maybe that's just a matter of taste or something. But I noticed a plot hole! It was a little bit strange that Linda (or any classmates/teachers) never noticed that Frank got beaten up so badly by Jeremy and also that Frank went to gym class the next day... I mean after that incident he was pretty badly bruised, wasn't he? That must've hurt while doing sports :x
But apart from that I really love the way you write and how the charcaters come to life!
I hope you'll update soon, I'm dying to know what happens next. Please wake up Frankie T___T My poor baby boys...
*INTENSE INTERNAL YODELLING*
1/13/16