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The Opposite Of Attraction Is Pushing Away, and We're Definitely Not Doing That - Comments
@FrerardMomma
Thank you so much for the feedback! I know exactly what you mean and I'll try to keep an eye out for when I do that in future chapters. I really appreciate you letting me know that, though!
@Blubxll
Sweet :) not trying to sound disrespectful if it does btw! But in some parts you tend to add full stops almost mid-sentence? (Rly bad at explaining sorry ha) sometimes you tend to be saying something, then you'll place a full, then continue the sentence afterward. When its like a dramatic part or something its understandable though :) this is just my opinion though!
@FrerardMomma
I'm so sorry! I just saw this! I would absolutely love some writing tips, thank you. What is it that I could improve?
Hey! I'm glad you're back! I loved the chapter and I'm glad you're doing better.
On my end... I came out to my mom and my best friend as Pansexual, my mom was completely supportive, my best friend is trying to set me up with another girl (because I'm DONE with guys at the moment), I got my hair cut into a pixie, and I'm out for summer now!
@FrankIeroIsMyHero
aww, thank you! Unfortunately, testing has taken up most of my time, so I haven't been able to write very much and the chapter is only half done. Plus, because things haven't been safe for me, I had to delete a lot of accounts and lost my old account on here. I finally was able to get this one, but it's still not ideal. However, school gets out for me tomorrow, so I'll have a lot of time to write again. Thank you so much for reading, though!
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9/20/16