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@Sharpest_Life_B
Honestly, I don't have a plan for the story. I just write and hope it'll fit in. I have a vague idea of the ending, but I should warn people now it may not be a happy one. Thank you in advance for the shout out :)
@killjoybyname
Yup, Frank is impulsive. I like where you seem to be going w/ Gee being here as a boy. Would be an interesting twist if HE was also a trapped hostage of sorts. I'd love to see him and Mikey get out of The Life. We don't know that much about Mikey but I can't wait to find out. This story is one of my new faves. You will be getting a shout out in the notes of my next update, which will probably happen this afternoon. :) I need to start putting a link so the authors know.
@Sharpest_Life_B
I guess Frank in this has more of a 'act now think later' kind of personality. But I agree it wasn't the best of moves to make, especially on Ray.
@killjoybyname
Oh I know. The irony wasn't lost on me though. I thought it was hilarious. However, Frank is more than a little slow in realizing that Gee is stuck in a position where he can't treat Frank the same as he does when they're alone. (I mean rly? He's 17 not 7.) And while I fully understand his decision to rescue Katie, what happened to the "gain the trust" ploy? Yes, the situation has changed but a smart person shuts up and gets the lay of the land. They don't immediately throw out rebellion and sarcasm, especially since these are known killers, and for now his circumstances are way better than the girls. Bad move Frank.
I love the slow build so much omfg. It's like every chapter is creating even more tension. Can't wait for the next chapter ;D
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@killjoybyname
your welcome. I just posted it. Oh man, :( I dont want an unhappy ending.
http://www.mychemicalromancefanfiction.com/Story/68464/Hesitant-Alien-Mail-Order-Husbands/13/
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