It's Not a Fashion Statement - Comments, page 24

Yeah, I'm not very good with grammar or stuff like that :/ if you would be willing to help that would be great :) and thanks for the criticism, it honestly helps



@gerweird.

Damn hormones. I cried. I cried hard. Poor Frank!

So far, it seems pretty good. But the fact that you have published this without actually editing makes it difficult to read. If you need a beta editor, I'd be happy to help you out.

if I have one criticism it is that the grammar is not up to par with the concept and is letting the entire work down with constant mistakes and errors, other than that, it's good.

@frerardcrap
Yay !!! I have something to look forward to then c:

Ah thank you,, it means so much :3 I love comments, it's really makes my day :) yeah they'll be an update tomorrow too c:

@xMyxIfinitexRomancex

I'm like in love with this :3 <3 thanks for being so amazing and having this talent that I can now read !

I can't wait for more :3

I BEG MORE UPDATE PLS

can't wait for the next chapter! Gerard is so nice in this and I love it.

I like where this is going! ^-^

PLEASE UPDATE

Omfg yes !!

thank you so much!x ill update again soon :)

@TransmissionExploder

Damn, can't wait for an update. I can tell this is going to be amazing.

i like this a lot already