Love-nap - Comments

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@My name is JeanValJean
PRISIONER 24601 YOUR TIME IS UP AND YOUR PAROL'S BEGUN. YOU KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS.
yeah. I thought that too. Great idea. Too quickly executed

This is a rather interesting concept, but I find the grammar, or lack thereof, distracting, and the characters seem unnatural in their actions, especially in the way Frank accepts his situation and warms up to Gerard alarmingly quickly with no character development in between or explanation further than Gerard not hurting him. Frank also seems to act like it a casual thing to occur rather than an extreme event. I praise you for the concept but I feel the execution is failing you.

@Gee'sCLUELESSgirl!
Oh I haven't mentioned it but I was going to make them about 15-16, they are kind of young for 16 I guess but yeh but I liked the cuteness going on lol. I think they're relationship might get more mature when Gee's ankle is better, I'm probably gonna write a sequel! xx

@Gee'sCLUELESSgirl!
I think they're both 14, but I'm not too sure

Can I ask how old they both are?.. You might've mentioned it, but I'm too lazy to go back and check. Lol
still loving the cuteness btw! Xx

Gosh!.. This just makes me grin and "Awwww" at its cuteness factor!.. Love it to itty bitty bits! (✪◡✪)✿
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No, bad parents for sending him to boarding school!

@Gee'sCLUELESSgirl!
@s-omeone-els-e
@Jigglypuff

Haha thankyou! :D

Awww I love this

this is really cute (:

You could have called this "Cutenap" ox