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awe frank man that's not cool
i wonder whats going to happen to mikey... he seems the most innocent at this point
wow, the things that could happen.
yeesh, i love this story.
i swear i slapped myself five times in a row when frank walked in the door, i honestly thought pete was gonna show up
damn your so good at writing it's just unable to be described in legit words
oml i haven't been able to get on here at all lately ;-;
but wow this story is the reson i stay on this website
This chapter reminds me of a less-scottish irvine welsh novel and omf it's so good. Like the whole of this is so good and thank fuck you updated <3
@sandy candy
Thank you so much! Ellen Hopkins is a huge inspiration to me and I love her writing so much! And I'll definitely keep this going, I've go some big plans for this story xx :D
This is really good and I love love love how you adopted Ellen Hopkins's writing style, she's one of my favorite authors and it really makes reading this a lot more interesting! I hope you keep writing this story because I'm really getting into it! It's so good!
@Revenge Parade
Thank you! and The format is something I decide to try, and I got the inspiration from a writer named Ellen Hopkins, who writes in a format similar. I thought it was a good idea because 1. it's even more fun to write. and 2. I was curious to see If I could make the story even more interesting do to the way the order of stanzas makes you read it. :3
Hey, I'm a bit curious on the format of the story? It's kind of written in stanzas and lines like a poem? I was wondering if that was intentional or something. Great story so far by the way!
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ahh frank ahh
you're killing me
I wonder where mikey's pizza went hmm
and the bathroom incident
wow frank... just wow lol
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