Vampires will never hurt you, well, we wont anyway! - Comments, page 3

Yaay, another update! I love this chapter, I loved Gerard's story, this chapter was really cool, but you are an evil woman because you were harsh on Ray but its okay

whoa is all i can say

More chapters soon please!!! You can't just leave me on a cliffhanger like this!!!

Ohhhhhh... Drama!

don't worry about it :)

Awhh thanks guys. I have some really good ides planned for the next few chapters. I'll write soon. Thanks again xxx

You're not the only one who feels like shit! My whole family and most of my friends are ill too. What you write is amazing, vampires and My Chem in one?! A dream... Merry Xmas!

We can wait. Have a great Christmas.xxx

MERRY CHRISTMAS!!! <3

Don't worry, I think most people won't be writing much the next few days.. Too much turkey to eat, and too many presents to enjoy! ;) Have a good one, and I look forward to reading more after the holidays xx

i like this story and where its going

I like dis! ;)

@Gee'sCLUELESSgirl!
You're welcome, my writers block is clearing loads so the ideas keep flowing now. and Awhh thank you, have a nice Christmas too. :) xx

Feel better!.. And thanks for the longer chapter.. Have a good Xmas.. Hope you're well by then xx

I'll try my best on the longer part but as I have said twice before, just celebrating writers block. It will take me time xx

• I like this! Your writing is good but it needs to be longer! But hey were not perfect!

I'm going to try get some longer chapters but like I said before I am just getting over a writers block so I find it hard to concentrate on a chapter for too long, ill try though xx

@TheFrerardParade
I'm loving this LOTS but longer chapters would be great! Update quickly!

No improvement needed.. Though I would LOVE some longer chapters now and then.. Just a suggestion :) xx

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