Hold On Tight and Don't Look Back - Comments, page 8

@killjoy1981
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you had to go and make a girl cry didnt you:'( but seriouly, this is the shit;) write more, its amazing x x

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@Epril SiDragon
.....I'm sorry!

*sobbing* WHAT THE ACTUAL HELL

@Sharpest_Life_Supb
It's totally fine, I actually find people more interesting when they do that.
I don't know why

Your welcome. If you read my last comment on "Please Gerard", then this is a perfect example of the brain/mouth filter issue. Guess I could have sent a private message but guess I'm just the expose myself kind of writer.

@Sharpest_Life_Supb
I would never thought I would get this kind of advice over the internet...but thanks <3

@Sharpest_Life_Supb well I'm kinda old lol. My first time was pretty awful even tho it was my husband but I had undiagnosed medical issues (that I still deal w 15 yrs later). But the main thing is to wait until you're ready and do it w someone u love and trust. An emotionally awful first is worse. I'm glad I waited. ;)

no no the smut was really good!

@Sharpest_Life_Supb
They wont argue...It's going to be a major drastic plot twist. That i'm not sure if it will ruin this story or not so i'm still thinking about it.

I have no idea, Yes most of us our girls and yes I base most of mine off of what I read on others. I'm not old enough to know what losing your virginity is like so can only imagine the awkwardness. Yes I understand what your talking about clearly and it's most likely very true,

Pls dont have them argue! As a writer myself I understand the need for conflict & tension for the sake of plot.... but Gee letting Frankie down would be the worst. I don't think the smut was bad. I've read quite a bit here but never tried to write any myself.

Something I do wonder about tho, are most of the writers on here women? If so, are they learning to write smut fr other written passages? I ask bc I'm curious to know if the real expirience (for men) is anywhere close to this. Esp a high schooler losing their virginity. I can read thousands of stories but in the end, I'll still only know what it was like for me as a chick. There was a great Killjoy story on this site that depicted what I consider to be a realistic virginity losing experience. Yes I want smut that is magical and full of fireworks just like everyone else. It's just the virginity losing thing.... Esp when the partner hasn't been with that many ppl either.

I'm NOT picking at your story btw. I actually think it was a good balance of giving us the smut we want but still writing about the pain and awkwardness. Anyone else k ow what I mean?

@Killjoy 4 Life
You're evil!

@FrankieBoyx
It involves a lot of crying but it won't be until later.

@Killjoy 4 Life
Damn, You're crashing my dreams. Just have to make them argue a lot in mine then.

@FrankieBoyx
No...not that

@Killjoy 4 Life
If it involves loads of arguments between them I'm down for that. XD

@FrankieBoyx
@Sharpest_Life_Supb

Thank you so much guys <3
I'm thinking of something for the plot...but you guys would kill me if I did it.
I'll still think about it!

I'm reading this and loving it. It handles tough subjects in a sensitive way. ;) At first I was here for the smut, and I know it's coming, but I'm willing to wait.

I nearly got kicked of the resturant I'min for squealing serveral times at this. I fucking love you. Remember NO SMUT EVER SUCKS!