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@night_owl.
Thanks! I have the next chapter written already. Just gonna review it tomorrow and then post it up.
@GiveEmHellKid!
Yes of course! And that's how to keep us readers hooked. I'm trying to emulate that in my own stories as a noob.
@Sharpest_Life_B
Haha I'm evil >:] But thanks that makes me feel a lot better. Glad you're still reading ^-^
@Sharpest_Life_B
Haha I'm evil >:] But thanks that makes me feel a lot better. Glad you're still reading ^-^
Doesn't seem rushed to me. The way u keep us on the edge is perfect but wicked at the same time. :) Just when Kai, and the reader, thinks something is going to go a certain way, there's a twist in another direction.
@night_owl
Thank you so much really! I did start writing it I've just had some writer's block lately so I'm sorry it's taking so long. Working on it slowly but surely.
@GiveEmHellKid!
I reread this and I love it even more and you are soo soo soooooooo talented!!!! Im not trying to rush you and im sorry if it seems like i am but update soon please!!!! I love this!!!! :D
@Iero.Pickles @night_owl
Thank you guys so much! Working on the next one. Hoping to put it out soon :)
@zombiecupcakes
I have completely different plans haha. But good ideas :)
@Sharpest_Life_Supb
Thank you thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it :D
I like how it's going maybe you can make Kai get a "boyfriend" and he gets Frank all riled up and he learns his true feelings for her, but in the middle of it all doesn't know how to end it with jamia because he doesn't want to break her heart so stays with her to spare her feelings but in turn maybe Jamia is only getting back together with Frank to make sure Kai stays away from Frank but somehow maybe Kai will figure that out have her "boyfriend" break up with her after awhile and have Frank feel bad for her and later on have her give Frank subtle hints he might or might not pick up on that Kai likes him :) but that's just my train of thought on how this would go :)
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I was reading that I'm school and I gasped really loud and it was quiet and everyone stated at me....it was awkward....I'm pretty sure I cussed too
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