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why do i smell a scandal coming on? is there a scandal coming on? idk how i feel about this....(im talkin bout chap 35)
@MayMayChan
ooooooooooh okay i will change it now thank you!!!
i thought about doing that! it would be a little difficult to try and time it in with everything that happens throughout T/A/S. when i was writing T/A/S i kept forgetting about them and when i suddenly remembered them i would be like 'oh shit' and just have a little side note that they were busy doing this or brendon and ryan are taking a break like idk. it would take some planning but i think i could do it actually. yeah. one day. i wanna finish the midget story first haha but thank you for the idea and stuff!
ooooooooooh okay i will change it now thank you!!!
i thought about doing that! it would be a little difficult to try and time it in with everything that happens throughout T/A/S. when i was writing T/A/S i kept forgetting about them and when i suddenly remembered them i would be like 'oh shit' and just have a little side note that they were busy doing this or brendon and ryan are taking a break like idk. it would take some planning but i think i could do it actually. yeah. one day. i wanna finish the midget story first haha but thank you for the idea and stuff!
oooooo! brainstorm! Shoot me if saying this is stupid but you sooooo need a mini story of brendon and ryan. like, tell their backstory and fill in holes where they're concerned and junk! pleasepleasepleaseplease?!?!?!?!?! i looooove rydon....
chapter 29 intense court thing: changing hammer to gavel would increse the intensity by sounding professional. Just a thought...
@MayMayChan
Yeaaaah I have a thing for conflicts hahaha. I don't have much reading time these days but I will definitely try and get some in for you :)
Yeaaaah I have a thing for conflicts hahaha. I don't have much reading time these days but I will definitely try and get some in for you :)
whoa. Chapter 25. Pardon my french but the shit just hit the fan. You are so my type of writer: conflict after conflict and the story keeps rolling. I think you might like some of my chaptered tales. Check em out sometime?
@MayMayChan
jesus how does that even happen how do i write car instead of guitar thank you for telling me anytime you see something like that dont hesitate to tell me you can be like my beta!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and omg i couldnt resist making claire know what sex was sort of kfasfafaskf
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jesus how does that even happen how do i write car instead of guitar thank you for telling me anytime you see something like that dont hesitate to tell me you can be like my beta!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and omg i couldnt resist making claire know what sex was sort of kfasfafaskf
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1) i love clair! baby making rofl!
2) I totally thought you were gonna say the art room smelled like pot XD
3) if my brothers room is any indication (and i really hope its not) sex smells like rotten asparagus
4) MCR stealing AA's thunder! awesome!
2) I totally thought you were gonna say the art room smelled like pot XD
3) if my brothers room is any indication (and i really hope its not) sex smells like rotten asparagus
4) MCR stealing AA's thunder! awesome!
oh my mental breakdown! and since i'm being a fixer upper, you kinda said "car" instead of "guitar" once in Chap. 21. Threw me off for a bit but its not too big of a mistake
@MayMayChan
no no no no dont be sorry! i'm actually shocked no one else has noticed it jfc i cant believe i actually got the day wrong. i wonder when i wrote that chaper exactly... there are a few chapters that i forgot to edit and then forgot which ones needed editing. maybe that was one of them idk. but seriously don't be sorry im glad you pointed it out bc now i've fixed it!
no no no no dont be sorry! i'm actually shocked no one else has noticed it jfc i cant believe i actually got the day wrong. i wonder when i wrote that chaper exactly... there are a few chapters that i forgot to edit and then forgot which ones needed editing. maybe that was one of them idk. but seriously don't be sorry im glad you pointed it out bc now i've fixed it!
@lyn-zmywifi am i really the first person to point that out? uh sorry? I think....It's just easy for me to remember cuz april 9th is exactly three weeks before my birthday.
@MayMayChan
DID I GET HIS BIRTHDAY WRONG???? ARE YOU SERIOUS????? FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCKKKKKKKKKK WHYYYYYYYY I SUCK IM SORRY IM SO SORRY EVERYONE JESUS CHRIST ITS BEEN LIKE THAT FOR TEN MONTHS ARE YOU SERIOUS OH MY GOD I AM THE WORST KIND OF PERSON I WILL GO FIX IT NOW
DID I GET HIS BIRTHDAY WRONG???? ARE YOU SERIOUS????? FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCKKKKKKKKKK WHYYYYYYYY I SUCK IM SORRY IM SO SORRY EVERYONE JESUS CHRIST ITS BEEN LIKE THAT FOR TEN MONTHS ARE YOU SERIOUS OH MY GOD I AM THE WORST KIND OF PERSON I WILL GO FIX IT NOW
i have but one issue with chapter 17: why did you make Gee's birthday one day off from his real one?
mmmmmmm chapter 16! i smelled the smut a mile away and i was not disappointed. You, my friend, have a gift.
@MayMayChan
hahahaha thats okay i enjoy reading peoples comments haha. and dont worry you're not the only one that comments by chapter. im glad you're enjoying this :) thank you for commenting
hahahaha thats okay i enjoy reading peoples comments haha. and dont worry you're not the only one that comments by chapter. im glad you're enjoying this :) thank you for commenting
holycrapholycrapholycrap Linda! This just got deep. And real! This just got real deep! Sorry i'm commenting so much, but I like going by chapter, not story....
I feel like an idiot! I didn't even make any connections with the name Ryan until Brendon showed up XD oh i do so hope there will be more of them.....
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