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i think he likes you, man - Comments, page 2
@completely-fearless-2
ah yeah sure, the first bit is frank's and the second Gerard's, but I'll do it anyway, thanks ^_^
i really really love this story, can I give you one bit of advise though? could you put Gerard's POV or frank's POV when you chnge character, it probably doesn't bother people but im stupid and I get easily confused :Dx
Darn, I was gonna comment on how amazing the "No, we don't keep children in our basement" line was amazing but I was a bit too late unfortunately...
@ierosaurus
Not bad! My friend was asleep on the sofa, I read it and laughed so loud that he woke up and promptly fell on the floor. I, of course, then laughed even more, causing him to call me a few names that are WAY too much for even the readers of THIS site! I still keep giggling like a mad person!
thanks for that ;)
xx
this is great oh god i love this story
9/16/14