Revolutionary - Comments

SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!

this is a very good story hope you update soon

@Mcrlove412
I fuckin love you, thanks man

@Mcrlove412
I fuckin love you, thanks man

I fuckin love this

@Frerardified
Why thank you

This is really good

Update?

@Frerardified
I promise you, it's coming! Sorry to leave on a cliff hanger.

Please update!!!!

@momiji_neyuki

Thank you guys so much you're incredibly awesome

@ThanksForTheCoffee

Fillers are soooooo necessary, without them it would literally be key points without rising action and then the end.

You really need to stop putting your writing down seriously sweetie. I hate stories that just jump right into the plot without giving me background. In Bondage Mansion I strived to make sure that all the characters were understood with background and filler parts. It is what makes a story from ordinary to extraordinary. ^-^

This is a very unusual vampire story so far and I cannot wait to see where you take it. And don;t worry about taking long between updates. You have a life too. ^-^

Subscribed.

@Geetah
Thanks so much! I promise I'll update sooner this time.

Oh gosh i can't wait for the next chapter!! :D This story is great!

@ThanksForTheCoffee
sweet thanks!

@blackandtight
It was intense. I love it.

@ThanksForTheCoffee
It was fun to write for him in this one just cause I know he'd never actually act like that

@TwistedKnife
glad you like it :)

damn gee