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Behind Amber Eyes - Comments, page 2
It was funny how she reacted to Party telling her not to go and, how he's probably gonna turn into a jealous sass master when she leaves.
It was funny how she reacted to Party telling her not to go and, how he's probably gonna turn into a jealous sass master when she leaves.
Damn, I like your writing. It's a good story, and I love how it's different because she's trying to avoid the Fab Four, rather then meeting and teaming up with them. You deserve more subscribers than you have. I don't see anything you really need to "work on", the storylines fab, you're grammars good. Just keep doing what your doing <3
This fic deserves so much more subscribers, but unfortunately Danger Day fics aren't that popular anymore. You're a great writer, and I can't wait to see what you have for us next(:
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