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Under the willow tree...(edited) - Comments, page 10
Please don't get upset, but I would like to offer some constructive criticism. Your writing is amazing, I love your story lines, they are great. The only problem is that I have a really hard time reading with all the exclamation points and even though I try really hard to tone it down in my head, its like the whole story is being yelled at me. Again, I love your work and don't want to hurt your feelings. Just want to help out and read without getting exhausted
@GeesGirl!
Aww, you're so sweet, thank you :)
7/21/14