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You're Not In This Alone - Comments, page 9
@XoSaveMeFromMyselfXo
Oops, I didn't see it. I might as well say something useful while I'm here: I really love this story, especially Gerard's POV[I think the reasons are obvious], and I actually had an idea much like this one, but now it's taken, so shit. XD It's awesome, keep it up. ^^
Ryan, as in Ryan Ross? If it's not him, I think I'm still gonna imagine it, just for the sake of my mental health xD
@Frerardified
I updated earlier with chapter 27 which is Ruby's POV about running into James....can you view that chapter?
@Frerardified
I'm sorry about that. Chapter 26 kinda contains stuff about the fight, like the end of it and I was gonna make the whole chapter about it but I struggled so hard writing it and every time I wrote it I just couldn't make it work so the best I could do was the dream flashback and it's bad, I know it is and I'm sorry to everyone reading this because I think I truly ruined the story with what I've written.
@Magical flying unicrorn
I actually didn't really think of that, maybe I should add a chapter with that in it? Is any one else interested in the fight?
I really liked this chapter, but I think it would've been better if you had written a chapter about the fight and when Frank asked Gerard to move out. Just my opinion and I have absolutely loved this story so far it was just this chapter I wasn't completely sure of. But keep it up! Love it!
@Frerardified
Originally in my mind this chapter involved an explosive fight between Gee and Frankie in the gallery and things end up broken but over the course of actually writing it... It turned into hot make up smut : )
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Thanks hun : )
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