The Fantasy - Comments

You got the inspo from that there programme what was on a year or so ago lol i remember watching it! xD the girl and she fell in love with this bloke and he turned abusive! awesome tho

@AmazingFrerard
I saw that too, its actually the inspiration behind this story- I thought it was so powerful and shocking I wanted to incorporate elements of it into my own work (as I have said earlier in the comments :P) xxx

the ending reminds me of a documentary I watched on BBC 3 about a woman in an abusive relationship and in the end got killed from an ironing board...

I read all of this in like 2 hours...I would love a Sequal!!

Fuck yes! Fucking sequel! I am hyperventilating.

holy shit the feels ;n; The alternate ending and first ending got me D: OMG

I really liked both endings. I mean who doesn't love a happy ending? But the other one, it was so unexpected yet...expected. I dunno how to explain it but I really enjoyed the realistic and coldness of the first ending.

I prefer the alternative one cos im kinda emotional and i feel more like the storys ended, u know what i mean?Franks death was very sudden and it just made me feel sad cos i know this stuff happens in real life and everything.Also Franks death was kinda unexpected i guess i just really wanted a happy ending for him after the shit hes been through.

I like the second ending

@MyHesitantRomance
Thanks :) xxxx

Wow that was a cold ending...good story though!

@Killjoy_Frank
Okay

@frankenstein
Yes and no, I'm writing another ending different from that. But the real story that "killed by my boyfriend" was based on was the inspiration for this story. So I guess this is actually based on true events (sort of) xxx

Same ending as " killed by my boyfriend"..

Ugh, I've been thinking about how I'd like this to end, like, the entire time I was in trig (math, yay *sarcasm*). Anywho, I feel like everytime I read a sad ending I'm like "oh, well at least it was realistic, happy endingings don't actually happen." But then if I read a happy ending I'm like "awww, the fact that their fictional lives worked out makes my sad, sad existence seem almost bearable." So yeah... That's where I'm at right now... basically, I'm saying that I'm cool which every way it plays out, so follow your writers intuition (that's a thing right?) This is getting ridiculously fucking long so ima shut up. *thinks about not sending comment* *shrugs* *sends stupid comment*

@Lee Is Dead
Aww thats so sweet :) I really appreciate it xxx

@frankenstein
I don't know the sort of ending I want yet, so I'm leaving it up to the audience to kind of throw ideas at me as its your guys' story too x

This is an amazing story, the events escalate in a way that makes the story interesting, but not illogical. The story line is original. The characterization is wonderful. Just everything about it is great. Super pumped for the final installment, hoping you get it up tonight.

and who knows, maybe you'll start another kickass story that I can write mercilessly long comments and extremely stupid questions on.

Please don't be too sad of an ending :'(
update again pleeeeeaaassseeee!!!

@Lee Is Dead



@frankenstein

Unfortunatly Gerard doesn't change but your right, Frank deserves some form of peace....

I'm really not sure, maybe if Frank was discovered as suicidal again Gerard would get his shit together, but honestly at this point Patrick seems like the better choice.