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You Know What They Do To Guys Like Us In Prison - Comments, page 5
@MCR_ShatteredHeart
Haha more controlling Gerard it is. Trust me it'll work more in the story's favor. I'm glad it's a hit
@Hazel_Highlight
Dont be iffy on Gerard being mean, just let it happen XD
Nothing wrong with Gee taking some control and giving Frank a couple options on shutting up
I think the chapter flowed great, so the rewrite was worth it. This is an amazing story and can't wait to see what you guys will bring to the table *whispers more controlling Gerard*. Seriously though it's a great story and I love it
@MCR_ShatteredHeart
I've always been iffy on Gerard being really mean and controlling. I definitely made some changes to the chapter- not to make him nicer, but to make it flow more, I guess. Frank needs to stop asking questions xD
THANK YOU FINALLY!!! I have been wondering what the Hell Gerard has been marking Frank with.
Also I love Gerard being mean and rough like this, I think it should show up more often XD
Loved the chapter!!
I'm so glad you all liked the church scene(: I wasn't too sure what reaction I'd get, like "Uhg why would you bring religion into the story like wtf" but I felt like this was completely necessary. Again so sorry for not updating. I do have a chapter ready but I'm really unsure as of to post it or not.
The church scene made me cry ;-; but anyways this is an awesome story and baby hedgehogs are awesome! :3
you can have hedgehogs as pets!? that's rad dude! anyways, awesome chapter, the church scene was beautifully written, much like the rest of this story :D x
Yay my character is in. Also baby hedgehogs are fucking adorable and I'm jealous. The church scene was wonderful honestly Frank reminded me a little bit of myself when I pray concerned for everyone else, being gay, and not quite sure how to pray.
Go to the nearest internet accessible device and push whoever is using it off and just start writing
7/10/14