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Ch 11- Perfect!! Xx

@frankenderp
Oh no! Sorry you're sick. My health is always terrible so I can sympathize. Rest up and take care of yourself.

@Sharpest_Life_B
it's a possibility! i don't think i could write it rn, because i am in the middle of a writer's block [plus, i am bedridden- this is my second time in two months that the flu hit me], but when that passes, i'll consider it- the story has potential at least for a part #2.

@frankenderp
I love it. I wouldn't mind a one shot sequel.....?

@Sharpest_Life_B
thank you! and yeah, i could go on and on about shakespeare; about how much i hate him, but still love him. it's a little fucked up, to say the least.

and yes, exactly! he is the ratty punk kid while gerard is someone who has spent the entirety of his life in the shade of his father & he hasn't gotten a chance to prove to be anything else but the mayor's son yet. but frank sees it- sees gerard the way he actually is- and that graffiti is basically a message to gerard that says 'now that they all despise you for getting fucked by some random punk, don't be afraid to be what you really are'
i really like how that one turned out, tbh.

#8 love it. I think the graffiti was a message to Gee. A f-ed up love note of sorts, but one that doesn't make Frank feel vulnerable. I think Frank wants Gerard to come back soon but he's trying to play it cool.

I love your stuff. It's beautiful. I know you weren't serious about the Shakespeare thing but I think most ppl who dont like him bc they don't understand it. The comedies are more accessible I find, esp if u can find a translation w footnotes to explain what certain things are. Or watch the movies. ;) I think it's helping w my plot development although I'm not certain. Guess I'll know when I'm done.

@Professionally Bored
thankkkk you <3

OH MY FUCK I FUCKING LOVE IT OH FUCK.

@ieros-and-milk
ya, starting in the middle is kind of my thing, haha. idk i guess i don't see the skill as something really developed, so when you say shit like this it totally makes me wanna hug you. <3 and also ya, i guess you can say metaphors and comparisons are a huge part of my writing and i guess it has to be that way. i don't really like blunt writing except for in comedy fics, bc that kind of demands a really casual style.
thanks for commenting, it makes my days spark & sometimes the flame catches, if i'm lucky. <3

hoooolllyyy shiiit
no
this is too good
good does not even touch at the intensity of your writing skill
i don't know how you naturally can write amazing shit like this but keep it up
I reaaallly like how you start right in the middle of things in the beginning and everything slowly comes together at the end. then it makes you want to finish the story and figure out what's going on. beside the fact that you can describe things perfectly with phrases and comparisons I could never think would would together so well, that's a really good technique bc it grabs the readers attention
but.......it's just so great...............

@ieros-and-milk
oh, shit sorry, i misunderstood. but practice makes perfect, still!

haha actually I haven't grown to like my writing at all in the least yet..the seven pages is other people's writing that I want to write like but maybe someday

@ieros-and-milk
that's amazing! i'm really glad you've found a way to like your own writing; i know how much shit it can seem sometimes, but actually it's mostly just in your head. practicing is the key, though- but I promise you- you'll love the result so much more after you've worked hard over it. it can be so frustrating sometimes, but it's totally worth it.
good luck. c:

god i love your writing so much you have no idea!! i was talking to my brother (a graduated writing major js) about how i want to write and have so many amazing ideas for what to write but i cant get the words right on the page and i wish i could just be better at writing and i told him about some "online teenage authors" writing "short stories" (pretty much frerard fanfics oops) that i wish i could write like which was pretty much you and this other author on here (ierostein) and he told me to just write down the ideas even if they suck at first and keep reading the stories that i want my writing to be like. and also ive started this little word document on this laptop for all my favorite phrases and paragraphs that i really really like that ive read and i thought id start with this story.......and i already have seven pages full.......so i just thought id let you know!!!!!

@mindchemicals
/wheezes/ thank you so much, i would think of a better response but i'm too sleep-deprived to do basically anything. <3

@mindchemicals
/wheezes/ thank you so much, i would think of a better response but i'm too sleep-deprived to do basically anything. <3

this is so fucking beautiful, god dammit hun - amazing, perfect, breathtaking - fuck I'm running out of synonyms.....it's just stunning. x

@ieros-and-milk
i just squeaked so hard, i mean i'm used to wheezing at comments and stuff but this is like a whole new level. thank you for making my day <3

this is the kind of writing I want to be able to do, it's so fluid and it flows so naturally like poetry there's no awkward stops or descriptions they're just all perfect and seem to fit in so well god damn I love your writing. especially this chapter.