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@Mirror_Mayhem
It broke my heart. I felt it slowly break and explode when I read that Frank had cancer. Everything happened so fast, yet so slow at the same time. I think I died when I read that part.
It broke my heart. I felt it slowly break and explode when I read that Frank had cancer. Everything happened so fast, yet so slow at the same time. I think I died when I read that part.
@My_Chem_Fan
Oh my god bad fucking mix. I am so fucking glad you loved it. This story has not gotten as many views as I wish it did. As fucking horrible as I sound, I am damn proud I made you cry, Thank you.
Oh my god bad fucking mix. I am so fucking glad you loved it. This story has not gotten as many views as I wish it did. As fucking horrible as I sound, I am damn proud I made you cry, Thank you.
No story on here has made me cry like this. What made it worse was that I was listening to The Light Behind Your Eyes while reading
@The Fabulous Killjoys
Of coarse! Using letters as a form of writing is new and a great way to write! Make sure you come up with something interesting for them to be writing about. Maybe a church is having kids "help" other kids by writing and "confessing" to eachother. Maybe a class has to write to someone in the navy. (----- All GREAT letter plots. Just use your creative-ness.
Of coarse! Using letters as a form of writing is new and a great way to write! Make sure you come up with something interesting for them to be writing about. Maybe a church is having kids "help" other kids by writing and "confessing" to eachother. Maybe a class has to write to someone in the navy. (----- All GREAT letter plots. Just use your creative-ness.
@AnotherInsanePerson
I am sorry to say; I am glad you cried. It was what this story was meant to be. I wanted it to tug at your emotions. Make you think, wonder, and feel. Especailly since I know that some of you are addicted/ in to cutting or drugs or drinking, this is proof that other things can make you feel! This made you feel sorrow but you could still see the beauty of their love and care, their troubles. Many people force themselves not to cry; here's one way to let it out. I wanted this story to make people feel, and I am so estatic that that is what I have acomplished.
I am sorry to say; I am glad you cried. It was what this story was meant to be. I wanted it to tug at your emotions. Make you think, wonder, and feel. Especailly since I know that some of you are addicted/ in to cutting or drugs or drinking, this is proof that other things can make you feel! This made you feel sorrow but you could still see the beauty of their love and care, their troubles. Many people force themselves not to cry; here's one way to let it out. I wanted this story to make people feel, and I am so estatic that that is what I have acomplished.
@Destroys!!!
I feel bad for high fiving my best friend when you said you cried. That is exactly what I want. I wanted this to be emotional and I wanted this to be good. When you say you cried, that tells me that it was good enough to trigger your emomtions. Like if you see a shitty movie and there is a part that is supposed to be sad, but it's not cause its shitty, but if its a good movie you do cry. So, this makes me happy.
I feel bad for high fiving my best friend when you said you cried. That is exactly what I want. I wanted this to be emotional and I wanted this to be good. When you say you cried, that tells me that it was good enough to trigger your emomtions. Like if you see a shitty movie and there is a part that is supposed to be sad, but it's not cause its shitty, but if its a good movie you do cry. So, this makes me happy.
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That was the plan. I wanted to capture you. Throw you into his world, and let you see that Gerard was the center of his orbit, that he meant everything to Frank, and how much it shattered Frank's heart that he was giving him the brush. The cancer is the climax. It is a lesson. You can't live life subtley. Don't live just to live. You have to live it with a purpose in mind, a person in mind. You have to believe in something, may it be a God, band, music, clinque, you must believe in something; someone. When you find someone who means eveything to you, you can't just live. They may know you love them, but you have to remind them. Humans are 'forgetful' creatures. Frank was being strong for Gerard. He didn't wan't the cancer to be the reason they became in love again. Love is supposed to be a two-way street and knowing that you are running down an endless road alone, to get to a certain place, and meet no one in the middle, you crash in the pit of emptiness your hopeful efforts dug you. The thing you love can be the thing to kill you.
~Mayhem
5/19/13