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@Killjoy-partypoisen
Oh, well that's completely understandable and it happens to the best of us. You're story though, its the only teacher Gerard one that doesn't have a completely putrid and annoying girl in it, like Katy is real in a sense and like I don't know I just love the story. <3
@feel_the_romance
OMG I love the gif! I will post the chapters soon but I still have to revise them to make them the best they can be. Thank you so very much for all the wonderful comment and the support you sent me! People like you are the reason why I haven't abandon this story. (Yes I had many thoughts about giving up)
@Chloe_XD13
Okay! I was also questioning putting that in there but I'm making Katy character similar to mine (except I wouldent fall in love with my teacher. Eek!) but thankyou for letting me know and I will change that!
Great story but in chapter 2 it says my chemical romance... If hes a teacher and his bro is a student... And they need money by teaching... Not to sound like an ass but just saying it shouldnt exist
@gvelitegymnast
No no it's okay, your not being mean at all. Thank you very much because now I fixed it and hopefully it made my story a hell of a lot better
@fangoria
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It would be a lot easier to read if things were capitalized. Like the beginning of sentences and stuff. There's are also a lot of things spelled wrong which makes it kind of difficult. Last but not least, it's Mikey not Mickey.
I'm not trying to be harsh or mean or anything. I'm just trying to give some constructive criticism that will make your writing better and help it appeal to your viewers more.
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No it's good! I was actually wondering if Mikey had a crush on her to be honest, like they had some moments. Well done!
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