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this fan fic is just.... i dont even know what 2 say about it... i love it u r really an amazing writer..
This story is so perfect! I told my friend about it because it was all I could think about at school the day after I read the last chapter, and then she read it and did the same, when she catches up with me we can talk about it:3 it's honestly amazing. It could easily get published. I can't wait until an update! Xø
I believe the italics are formatted < em > < /em > without the spaces, if you want to give that a try. As for the chapter, I'm laughing because Frank's just like O_O HE KNOWS and it's hilarious. I liked how you semi-resolved the last chapter--I mean, you didn't, but they're not fighting tooth and nail against each other any more. That's got to count for something. :)
Oh my god. You're an amazing writer. I'm fighting back tears, if I wasn't so engrossed in the story, I would have had tears everywhere! Please update before I explode!!!
oh holy mother of balls this is glorious I'm crying I can't even see what I'm typing I'm so upset and aghhshfhvhb. I just. Wow.
I don't know what do with myself. Or what do say right now. I just want to curl into the fetal position and cry.
You--dude, I have absolutely no idea what to say except I agreed completely with both of them, even in contrast to each other. Your prose. Wow. I didn't start crying until after the last sentence, because this is deep emotional shit. The entire story is deep emotional shit and I maybe cried once because of this a long time ago. But the coffee mug... You used the last paragraph-like thing so well. No feelings; or at least they're not prominent like the rest of the chapter; just a small thing, but if crescendos into being the epitome of the chapter because. just. Fuck.
Asdfghjkl I love it! Was so excited to see an update!!! This is so amazing, one of my favourites! Can't believe you're 14 though, I'm 13 and I could never write with such a skill as you do! From your writing style I would have guessed about 18! Love it! xoxoxo
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. And aw Pete has a crush on Frankie :3 so cute! Can't wait to read more and if you do write another frerard ill be sure to read it!!
THIS STORY IS AMAZING PLZ UPDATE ITS BEEN LIKE FOREVS FROM THE LAST COMMENTS IF U DO I'LL GIVE YOU LIKE CANDY AND SHIT
xD sorry
but plz update? :3
xD sorry
but plz update? :3
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10/30/13