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Disenchanted - Comments, page 2
@Clockwork.Sanity
Thank you so much! I've always liked seeing your comments aha, they're so nice :) And I'm the exact same, I love sad fics!
@Moon moon
Thank you so much, that really means a lot to me! I'll be writing the alternative ending, a few people seem to want that :)
Sadly I think this was a one time thing though, I'm doing huge exams this year so I'll have no time to do anything. I never even thought I'd write a fic though so I'm pretty proud of this no matter how bad it was aha.
@Teaandtits
I'm so sorry I made you cry :( I'm sorry you were disappointed that they died but I felt like it was the right ending. I'll be writing the alternative ending though :)
@Frerardified
Aha aw no, I'm sorry it broke your heart, that wasn't really my intention! (even though it probably looked like it was)
@Twenty-One Killjoys
Thank you so so much, this means a lot, I'm so honoured aha :') You're so sweet!
I loved the ending (however heart breaking)
It'd be nice to have an epilogue for how the last chapter ended and an alternative ending where they didn't die might just be the best thing ever B)
(Your writing is wonderful, so whatever you do I shall enjoy!!)
I LOVE how you ended it. It was realistic and bittersweet and I just eat up endings like that. An epilogue interests me, because I always like seeing what comes afterward and the real side of people a death brings out, but I'd be content if you just left it like this.
I think an epilogue that's about how everyone reacted to the suicides would be really good. Like the aftermath of everything. An alternate ending could be cool too, but I really want to see an epilogue because this story is one of my all time favs and I wanna know like how mikey and the cops react to everything. Whatever you choose to do though, I bet it will be great. You're a great writer and I look forward to future stories!
Dude, I cried really hard reading that last chapter and I'm crying writing this now thinking about it. I think an alternate ending would be awesome where they don't die or something. It's your call but I'm disappointed that they both died...
The last chapter was to me perfect and I loved every single bit of it. My opinion is if you did make an epilogue, make one based off the original ending. Xx
An alternate ending would be cool, for people who didn't like the ending that you chose. It would give them a choice on which readers liked better. Options are good!
@freakoutboys
Thank you so so much, that's so lovely!
Yeah, I think I'll do both, it'll probably take me a while though aha
7/31/14