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He's not mad, he only looks that way. - Comments, page 8
@laineydays I've been trying to fix that issue for a while. I put spacing and paragraphing into my writing, but it all seems to disappear when I upload. I get the same issue on my other fic too and I don't know why :( I am working on it though. I'm glad you like the story anyway!!
I really, really like this but can I offer just a small bit of constructive critisim?
When you write, it'd be good if you could break up the sentences and add a lot of gaps especially when they're speaking, as I loved the imagery I get from reading this, but it's on all top and I kept getting confused on who was talking! I think if it was spaced out just a bit more, it'd be fab! But that's all! Otherwise I really love this! :D
When you write, it'd be good if you could break up the sentences and add a lot of gaps especially when they're speaking, as I loved the imagery I get from reading this, but it's on all top and I kept getting confused on who was talking! I think if it was spaced out just a bit more, it'd be fab! But that's all! Otherwise I really love this! :D
@imakilljoywannabe haha, aww, I've been there! But don't worry, the next chapter is up reeeeal soon. You like the banner? Awesome :) x
@Redrumkittykat I'm so glad you gave it a chance!! I don't know what's up with the paragraphing, I do put spacing in but it seems to get edited out when I upload, it's really irritating. But anyway, thankyou!! I'm glad you like it! X
I'll be honest, I really love this story. I almost didn't read it, because there weren't any paragraph indentations, (It's just harder for me to read sometimes), but I was like 'I'll give this story a chance, see how it goes' and I couldn't stop reading. All of your descriptions are amazing, and your story makes me feel that I'm right there with the characters. I'll be checking for updates. :)
I am picking all the wrong stories to start, they're all on cliffhangers! I can't wait for the update, and the banner is awesome :D
@Kilani_Killjoy Haha, thanks :) I just picked mybpersonal favourites, to be honest. I think Gerard suits the Danger Days look really well, and also it kind of reflects the insanity a little more, you know? With the red hair. And Revenge Frank is just nommy ;) sooooo... :) x
Wow. This is awesome. ^_^ Love how you kind of switched it up with Danger Days Gee and Revenge Frank. Good mix xD
@CatThatOinks awww OMG, thankyou. I love your stories so muuuuuuch, the fact that you like mine is aaaaaahh :3 x
Grr, to short of a chapter! But I'm still happy you updated ^_^ Poor little crazy ass Gerard, at least Frank is there to comfort him :)
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