When You & I Were Forever Wild - Comments, page 5

PLEASE DO A SEQUEL! WE ARE ALL DESPERATE FOR YOU TO CONTINUE THE STORY TOO! SO PLEASE DO! :)

@shizzlenannigans
YOU WILL FIND OUT TOMORROW

HOW WILL THIS BE RESOLVED IN ONE CHAPTER? D:

@Killjoy-partypoison
If that's the direction the story/last chapter will go in, then yes, that's a possibility. I don't know yet. In general, I like drama and I like a dramatic plot...I like the ups and downs. So writing just about 'happy times'...I don't know. It might become boring to the readers and myself.
We'll see how things are after the last chapter. :)

@the_girl
With your kind of creativity it will be hard to let me down, you never do. You always seem to do the unexpected and I love that. But (if you choose to let gerin happen again) then you can write about their relationship growing strong again and maybe possible marriage. But like I said before I completely respect which ever decision you choose and I can't wait to see what you come up with

@Killjoy-partypoison
Well in that case, thank you AGAIN. I'm kind of scared now of anything that I might write in the future because what if I will never be able to reach that kind of 'intensity' with a story again? That's another reason why I don't want it to end.
I mean who knows, maybe I will get ideas for more chapters or a sequel. I'm not able to tell for sure. All I know is that the next chapter will wrap up this part of the story. And no matter what, I hope you'll like it :)
Thank you so much, honestly, it means the world to me. It means the world to me that people even read this! So when I get feedback like this, it just makes me incredibly happy. I hope I'll never let you down!


@alandofunicornsandmikey
AND NOW YOU ARE MAKING ME CRY! STOP IT! (No but really thank you so much ahhh I can't with all these lovely comments!)

I CAN'T TELL IF I'M SOBBING BECAUSE OF YOUR AMAZING WRITING, OR BECAUSE YOU'RE AN AMAZING WRITER WHO MAKES ME CRY.

@the_girl
Awe! And by the way I don't lie to people just to make them feel good about themselves so what I said about your story being my favorite story ever is 100% true I swear! and personally I think you have way more talent then most published authors out their. But your writing is beyond incredible in words that I can't describe. But here is one real life example I can use: I don't cry (unless it's about MCR'S breakup) but no book or movie has ever made me cry. But your story had me on the floor in tears. I never knew that a book could have this much impact of my emotions. I love it! I wish that this story could go on forever, but I have to teach myself that nothing can last that long. I really hope you don't end this story next chapter. Even if it was two more chapters I would be extreamy great full but I will respect whichever decision you choose. Anyways I just wanted to tell you that you are defiantly one of my favorite authors and that I can wait for the future when I am able to get your published story off of the store shelves.

@Killjoy-partypoison
I'm not sure whether to believe you or not haha because I just can't believe that my story could have this affect on people. Honestly, I never thought it'd be special to ANYONE but me. And having read so many books myself (all genres really) I know who I consider talented writers and I know I would never, not in a million years consider myself having even 1% of their talent. So right now I'm just extremely overwhelmed and moved by what you said...I will probably screenshot this (and other comments) and print it out and put it on my wall to remind myself that maybe I'm actually good at something...or at least 'not bad'.
I mean now I just want to keep writing this story forever, now that I'm reading your comment and all the others I've received I actually want to add 1000 more chapters!!

WOW...like...I love the Hunger Games! This compliment is just insane....are you really serious? Or are you just making fun of me? Either way, this made me cry with happiness so THANK YOU :)))

Okay I'm going to be completely honest here. I love reading, it is my favorite way to spend time. I've read almost every popular, trending teen book out their and I thought that a lot of them where incredible, until I read your story. Nothing can compare to 'when you and I were forever wild" because something about your writing makes me feel every word on the page, making me understand what Finn and Gerard are feeling. Because of your writing I can actually feel all the happy times that they spent together and all the tragic heart breaking trams they felt, and nothing made me feel that way before .
For three years 'the hunger games' has been my favorite book and I always used to think it would stay like that for a while, but now 'when you and I were forever wild' took its place as my favorite. I want you to keep your account on this website so one day when you have your own book published you can tell me the title of it so I can be the first one to buy it off the bookstore shelves.

@MayDeathNeverStopYou
Aww I'm glad you found it again and that you kept reading :) Thank you so much!

@ronivengeance
I DON'T KNOW! Honestly, I want to keep writing...whether it's by making a sequel or writing more chapters...but I'm lacking ideas, tbh. And I don't want it to become boring.

AWH MAN ONE CHAPTER?! IS THERE GONNA BE A SEQUEL?

OH MY GOSH I READ THIS A WHILE AGO AND FORGOT TO SUB IT I FINALLY FOUND IT!! and this story is just amazing...in every way. You need like a standing ovation or something :D

@mickenz96
Oh my, I don't even know what to say! This made my day! Actually, more than that! Thank you so much :) It's definitely the most intense story I've written so far. And the progress of writing it was very intense and emotional too. That's probably because I've had the idea in my head for so long (before I had even written my previous stories) and I went over it, again and again, scene by scene...and that might sound weird now but it became part of me. I can't believe it's almost over...I don't want it to end...I know I say that at the end of every story but this time I really really don't want it to end. I've been thinking about ways to add more chapters (I have 2 more to go) but I just don't want it to become boring...
And you know, I was always so worried about not being able to 'explain' or 'portray' the emotions as well as I wanted to so it means a lot that you said all that because it means I was wrong and I actually don't suck at it as much as I thought I did. And also considering that english isn't my first language so that just gives me a lot more confidence - thank you so much!
(I wouldn't say I'm good enough to write novels though...never really thought about it)

<3

@shizzlenannigans

Oh man, another comment that's made my day! Thank you :))) I WANNA KEEP WRITING ON THIS STORY FOREVER! I'm sad that it's gonna be over soon.

This story is the most beautiful thing I've read in a while. It's getting pretty close to More Than This by Patrick Ness. It's so full of emotion and gorgeousness.
I managed to avoid crying this time though. I'm proud of myself for that :p

I wanted you to know that you've made me feel more emotion than I have in quite some time. It might sound weird but I've been living vicariously through this story, and you did such an excellent job, it feels so real. I hope someday you move on to write novels that make people feel so many different things, just like this did for me. I'm desperate for a happy ending, but everything you've written has been so beautiful.

@Demolition Reptarr
......it is quite sad

the feels. everywhere. cry. sob. Gee n Finn. over? NUUUUUUUUUU SHE WASNT READYYYYYY.

@ilikecookies
@ronivengeance

you guys, as cruel as it sounds but this is the greatest compliment ever! thank you so much! it is so much more than I could have ever hoped for :)

I started crying halfway through the chapter. It was great though.