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Guess what @Authority Disturbance is uploading

No that is not fair at all you can not do that mary meanie that is why i wanted to call you@Authority Disturbance



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Haha

No that is not fair mary graCE HOLM

Ya lol

You're right.. Cliffhangers are fun!.. ;) x

Ya because now I have a phone I can update on

You vanished, and now you're back! YEY! X

ya

SUPER GERARD

And Gerard randomly says, out loud, "OK" and his friends wonder What the fuck is wrong with you?

Sounds like a plan

ok I have no school today so i will update more after I make some coffee

Yey you updated! Please post again soon

i would proof read some, because the grammar and spelling is screwed up a little, and put some more details and descriptions in, like setting and character description. but i really like the plot line.

I love this but you need to work on grammar and adding in details that will help make chapters longer and the reader will be able to see in the minds eye what's going on

Do you like it

oooo yay