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@Hazel_Highlight
No! I mean the ending of this chapter. God, I didn't mean to mess with your emotions again! This time I'm actually sorry
@Hazel_Highlight
Sorry(not sorry). I told you it was gonna be sad! I was thinking about rewriting the ending to make it a little more detailed y'know?
@TwistedKnife
Every time you comment, I literally don't know what to say because thank you isn't enough! I want to by you a house and supply you with all the band merch and awkward artwork you could possibly handle. I love getting feedback like this(and constructive criticism). Please analyze my work like an English teacher even more.
@Professionally Bored
You don't understand how hard it is to believe that at times, and that's why I want people to hear it (or read it). Thank you so much for that!
How dare you shatter my feels right before school.
Btw that ending was magnificent. It just added to my overflowing feels. God damn it
How can a disease that is horrible be described so well I want to say beautifully but that's not the right word maybe, eloquently? You are the master of emotions my friend, both mine and your characters. I could read your works all day and honestly sometimes I do. Once again I loved this chapter as I usually do.
@TwistedKnife
You don't know how seriously I'm considering doing that. Thank you so much!
@RecklessNightmare
Thank you!
Sorry(not sorry)
@Professionally Bored
I'm gonna take that as a compliment...
@Stitches
You're staying around for the happy ending which is actually the beginning(???????) I confuse myself and I'm the fucking writer
Okay the emotions in this chapter. I can't even begin to describe how they make me feel, God publish a book!
@Hopeless Ruby
I would stick around regardless, but goddamn, the journey to day one is gonna kill my tear ducts.
@Stitches
This will definitely have a happy ending if you think about it because on day 1 everything will be fine. So actually this will all get happier if you don't think about the previous chapters. So stick around!
@TwistedKnife
That wasn't rude at all! Trust me I needed that info.
That's what I wanted to show. I didn't want it to change to Frank not loving Gerard or Gerard wasting away. I just hope this won't get confusing for me or people reading.
@needlesandsyringes @Hazel_Highlight
I can't even say I didn't mean to make you cry... Because I did and I'm a sadistic fuck. Love you *kisses (again)*
I LOVE YOU FOR OUR RESEARCH YOU INSPIRE TO DO MORE RESEARCHED FICS ON MY OWN! Seriously amazing I really love the going backwards in time it's very interesting because we now already know the outcome so well get to see everything develop instead of dissolved which is immensely interesting. Also being raised a Christian and going too Christian funerals you got it correct. They are basically a normal funeral style except we don't have priests we have pastors, they do read the bible but don't cross themselves. Priests are a Catholic thing. Sorry if this is a rude correction I just thought I'd say since you didn't know.
Ah, motherfucker, you sunnovabich. Almost every time I read one of your chapters, I start crying. And now this?! You're killing me man, just killing me and my unstable emotions. I don't know how I'm going to be able to read this, holy shit. So intense. I know! Lots of tissues and lots of intermissions so I don't sob for the rest of the day. (This is positive raging of course; it's so good and so depressing and so ungh.)
@Hopeless Ruby
Well one of my future plans is to possibly become an English teacher, so that makes me happy. Also I'm totally down with the house idea. Although I'm way too young for the house. Maybe just the band merch and artwork. Anyway looking forward to the next chapter.
9/10/14