A Surprise Party? - Comments, page 5

This is amazing everything just flows its perfect

Yeah, he's a really fun character to write.

I love it when Gee is real and not his flamboyant bank robber self.

@MCR-willcarryon

Thank you (●♡∀♡)

This was absolutely amazing and awesome and I'm surprised Ray had the balls to do it too...

oh my i love this so much cx you're an amazing writer

@Cathairiseverywhere

A friend of mine's fang sticks out a bit when she grins, that's where I got it from. (It's because her teeth are a little crooked, it's adorable really) So yeah, unless you've got teeth like her it wouldn't work. Glad to hear you tried though, lol :). Thanks for reading.

When you were describing Joseph's smirk I tried to do it...I probably looked like a dumbass. Anyways I really like whet you have here I can't wait for the next chapter!

@Sinful-phobias

Thank you, and will do. :)

Omg!!!!!! Update soon please this is too good :D

This is amazing! <3 stay awesome!

Ugh Gerard and Frankie need to get together soon!

Update soon! This is so good.

Ugh this story is utter perfection

Your writing is just so fantastic

@Heartless Killjoy

You're welcome. Thank you for reading. :)

@Darklace

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grr clief hanger but so good

Oh, what a breath of fresh air (:

ehehehehehe i will never get enough of this story.. i really like it :) Thanks a lot 4 writing this ^_^