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I really like your style of writing and the double view on things, it's very unique. Can't say i don't like the smut XD anyway great chapter and keep it up!!
@ScreamingRevolver
I'm sorry. I don't like it either tbh. i promise it wont resurface. its not a part of the plot.
Gerard I stg after putting Frank through that, you'd better shower him in roses and sparkles and love and cuddles to make it up to him .-.
I like the small twist you've put into Gerard's sadistic side, but it scares me ;-;
Great chapters, though. I enjoy reading them.
Well, I enjoy your writing as it's fabulous, but I don't so much enjoy the way Gerard's acting now ;-;
@TwistedKnife
Honestly I'm so glad this chapter has stirred up so emotions. I love insightful comments the best. I don't think I'll make Gees sadistic side get out of hand, but you never know with plot twists
@TwistedKnife
Honestly I'm so glad this chapter has stirred up so emotions. I love insightful comments the best. I don't think I'll make Gees sadistic side get out of hand, but you never know with plot twists
Honestly Gerards sadistic side is kind of scary, I mean it's not abusive but it's also not exactly completely fun for one of the parties involved meaning Frank. So hopefully Gerard doesn't slip further into that because it's pretty scary to think about what he can do of he lets it control him. Also I actually feel really bad for Ryan abusive situations are never a safe place to be especially if it's family doing it to you it makes it even more difficult.
@Sophiepantz
Thanks! And don't worry your "why gee" question will, of course, be answered in the next chapter when we peek into his mind. I hope to have it finished by the end of the weekend, but don't hold me to that.
@milolanemustdie
It's perfectly alright! Your philosophies are all correct just to reassure you. I would never ruin the perfect love of my otp.
Nooooooooo!!!! Geeeeeeeee whyyuyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!????!?!?!?!?!?!? That was so unnecessary Gee...very disappointed.
It was a great chapter otherwise!! :D
Is it too pathetic that I started crying at the sex scene? I mean, I wouldn't call it rape, but it was kinda non-consensual and that kinda thing makes me rally sad for some reason. I don't know, I'm blabbing, sorry, but this chapter left me feeling sorry for two people, not just one.
And I really don't think Gerard is a sadistic perv no matter how off his kinks can be sometimes, I believe he's just really possessive and scared that Frank will leave him at some point, because he doesn't think of himself as good enough- even though he would never admit it since he's supposedly the dominant and confident side of their relationship. At least I like to think of it that way, because it would be, again, really sad if it wasn't love that was going on between the two of them, but merely just fucking. After all, I think they're risking too much for it to be pure lust, or just for the sake of getting off, so I hope I'm right. Even though it's a cliché, everyone digs stories where true love is involved, in one way or another.
I hope your eyes haven't fallen out from reading my stupid rant, but it's 4:32am, I'm hungover and in the mood to share my dumb philosophies with the rest of the world.
If I was Frank, I wouldn't have gone through with the sex, no matter what Gee did. I would have tied him up if I had to so he knew about Ryan. As much as I hate Ryro for what he did before, I feel so sorry for him.
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I feel better knowing gee regretted going too far with frnk...anywhore love this story either way! Xx
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