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@Ay3_its_Frank
Ahhhh thank you ^^ It's taken me so many years to get my writing to the point it's at, and I'm still trying to improve. If I may give a suggestion, read all the time. Don't just read for the enjoyment, though. Pay attention to the structure and how the words and phrases flow together. It's a great way to pick up useful writing tips, especially if you just want to write recreationally.
Also sorry this is 7 months after you said that. I hardly ever check this website anymore orz
@MayMayChan
I don't deserve to make your heart soar!
<3 <3 <3
I wish I could write like you.
Love your stories and you!
-xoxo Frank
gghjewsh!
I just binge read this for about 40 minutes!
God I love it!
You're suck a great writer!
-xoxo Frank
Just read this start to finish in one go, and I'm with everyone else..... SEQUEL PLEASE???!! Beautifully amazing! Or... Amazingly beautiful? Not sure which, probably both!! (; X
If you do, do more I will look forward to it because this story is one of the best ones I have read and I'm not kidding. I loved this story so much thanks for writing it :3
a sequel would be awesome! If you don't want to write one though that's totally cool, I loved the ending and you're just an amazing writer. Thank's so much this was one of my favorite fics :)
@momiji_neyuki
of course I will! I'm honored that you think I'd be a good person for this task. I can't promise it'll be soon, though...
of course I will! I'm honored that you think I'd be a good person for this task. I can't promise it'll be soon, though...
At the time of writing this, because they don;t give you a time line, I am on chapter seven and I just read that you are a dialogue writer and that you purposefully minimized it is your writing...why? I love dialogue! It gets the greatest emotion for the characters across to the reader. That is where the laughter and drama truly lie.
If I may make a request of you, I would like you to read a difficult story that i am writing on AO3 that is heavily dependent on dialogue. It is based off of an anime of the same name. I would like you honest opinion of it, and please leave it on the site, instead of here so I know what chapter(s) you thought were the most interesting.
Thank you for your time and patients and I will continue reading now, it is most intriguing. ^-^
http://archiveofourown.org/works/945402/chapters/1845247
If I may make a request of you, I would like you to read a difficult story that i am writing on AO3 that is heavily dependent on dialogue. It is based off of an anime of the same name. I would like you honest opinion of it, and please leave it on the site, instead of here so I know what chapter(s) you thought were the most interesting.
Thank you for your time and patients and I will continue reading now, it is most intriguing. ^-^
http://archiveofourown.org/works/945402/chapters/1845247
It was beautiful! lol And d'aww Gee thinks of me as a little sister, even tho i'm 70. Oh well! lol This was awesome! YOUR THE GREATEST MADDY!!!
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@MayMayChan
Oh its fine! Sorry it took 6 months for me to reply, this website is messing up for me so much.
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