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@Screaming Tears
Oh god I completely forgot about this fic, when I get the chance I would love to write more
Oh god I completely forgot about this fic, when I get the chance I would love to write more
@syrastrange Thank you so much for the comment, I'm glad his thoughts are making you giggle xD I wrote this last year, so I totally agree with some things needing to be worked on. I should have re-worded it before posting it..
Teacher/Student relationships always made me feel in the weirdest of ways. Most of the time, I really dislike them (I dunno, I think I'm sorta a prude), but sometimes (usually with fanfiction) I find myself enjoying them. I like how you're going about writing this. Frank's internal thoughts kinda make me giggle. (When he was like, "Mr Way is hottest guy ever," lol). I think your characterizations could use some work though. Like, how Frank and Gerard interact with each other and their personalities. but other than that I found your story (so far) sweetly indecent. :D -S
8/16/13