Mark Addams - Comments, page 2

@Blood Bunny
Anything is possible. In the land of fan fiction :D

@RubyToroIeroWayLeto
I know I am really trying to fix all the mistakes. Thanks for reading.

@Katy Hullett
Lol yeah I know. I don't think it will mess him up that bad.

I call bullshit. HAVE YOU EVER SEEN THE BODY OF THE MAN THAT IS FRANK IERO!?!? well it's pretty fucking hot. And now pregnancy is gonna fuck it up!! ;(
Oh, and I blame Mark for this shit.

p.s. AWWWW I can't see them but I can picture baby Mikey and Gerard <3

How is this even POSSIBLE!?!?!

This is really good, one thing I would suggest though is getting an editor or beta because there are a lot of grammar mistakes, nothing that destroys the work, they're just a little distracting from the otherwise brilliant work.

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@Katy Hullett
I love you too!

@xxstraightjacketxx
lmao!

I SHOULD BE SAD BUT I'M LAUGHING SO MUCH AT THE JB THING STILL AND ALSO IF YOU SWITCH ROUND HIS INITIALS THEY ARE BJ AND THE DILDO THING IS JUST...











he had it cumming to him

@Killjoy96
Hahaha! Omg I love you!! Love greenday, MCR and hate JB
xD

@Katy Hullett
well yeah i did kill him, i have to say i was listing to 21 guns by green day.

Did you really kill Justin beiber?? xD please say yes! This would make the whole chapter less dark and dramatic HAHAHAHAH. You really know how to build a scary atmosphere

@merci pour la musique
yeah it is Dan and Phil. i am glad you like the chapter. it took forever, but i knew i wanted Dan and Phil in it.

when I saw Lester and Howell all I thought was Phil and Dan =) love the chapter by the way!

@Giraffes Scare Me
lol it is >:) i see you in hell.

I feel bad because I Justin B. could be justin beiber, and I had the creepiest smile on my face at the thought of it being him.
Im going to hell forthat one. -.-

@Killjoy96

Wow you did well for me to not find this sooner then... and I don't mean it although I would like a Pikachu for xmas.. *builds home by tall grass hoping to spot one*

@xxstraightjacketxx
Congratulation your my first threat!!!!!
Oh and don't worry Mikey will be Okay.
~Rae!

MIKEY MIKEY MIKEY OH MY GOD MIKEY MOUSE ARE YOU OKAY?? IF YOU HAVE HARMED MIKEY I SWEAR I WILL CAUSE MY OWN STORM PIKA PIKA STYLE GET ME?? MIKEY YOU'LL BE OKAY I'LL CHARIZARD ANYBODYS ASS WHO TRIES TO HURT YOU!! x.0

wait wait wait.. what was wrong with Gerard? He couldn't be happy for no reason.. ?

White Boy Wasted. >:}

@Katy Hullett
Very very soon.