You'll Invest Yourself in Me - Comments, page 10

I love this story so much!

Okay this chapter was fucking awesome-sauce. xD you're amazing. i really enjoy how frank is like: ugh, kiss kiss…wait no, i have to tend to your mind. " and i love how you worded the last few paragraphs, it was weird and beautiful in a way(especially that last sentence ) unff. xD any who! keep up the good work, update before i cry. and all that <3

@Hopeless Ruby
No it's no weird i would have squealed to well after i fainted lol

i should not be laughing at asshole Finn but i am

@wolfgirl0819
It comes naturally (when you're with me, baby! Selena Gomez? Anybody? Not even when she was still on Disney and wasn't a whore?)
Sorry I had to do that. I don't really think that highly of myself. It took a lot of courage to post this.
I reread the first chapters 30 times each before I posted them.

@MCRKilljoy
Don't worry, I like dirty minds. *wink wink*

@Mirror_Mayhem
I will definitely have to check that out!

@Killjoy (and) @frerardlove1
Is it weird that I squealed after I finished writing that?

THEY KISSESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS OMG I SWEAR I FAINTED JUST NOW

THEY KISSEEEEEEEEEEEEED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *party*

I have insomnia too and I get so tired and I am like dying because I never get any sleep, even when I WANT sleep!

Mint green is a superbly awesome color.

ALSO, BTW, WHAT THE FUCK EVER, I found a documentary about MCR in the Bullets days and people said, more than once, that Gerard lived his life on the brink of sanity. It is a cool (but unauthorized) documentary. I can't really link it because it is in 12 parts, but some people have it in playlists, it's called 'Things That Make You Go mmmm' look it up on YouTube.

How do people write stuff this good? Like holy shit, this thing, I can't even.

@Hopeless Ruby
Lol I didn't mean that... But it sounds better for a future plot instead xD my sick mind
ok yeah just ignore that and go on being an epic author

@TwistedKnife
Awwww You're so welcome! People need to know that they all have beautiful minds.

@Screaming Tears
You'd think I'd have 20 chapters done with the amount of time on my hands, but nope I spend my days staring at a very white, very boring ceiling.

@MCRKilljoy
You like puppies too?! I thought I was the only one.
And I couldn't just make them fuck on his desk right away. Where's the plot in that?! Although now that makes a great future chapter. ;) it's gonna happen.

YAY finally something happened! :D took about 12 chapters ... :P insomnia sucks but it helped me find out how freaking funy Bert McCracken is
and I think he's making me random-er
okay I'm just going off track
I like puppies and this story
well bye

Insomnia indeed sucks balls. ;)

Okay I'm gonna sound really fucking sappy right now But I don't fucking care. Thank you for saying I have a beautiful mind because honestly I needed that. Anyiero THEYKISSEDOHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD!

@TwistedKnife
I AM THE FEELS MASTAH! MUHAHAHACOUGHHAHAHA

@fiftyshadesofmrway
I feelz ya, but he is just so attractive and talented that you forgive him for his weird taste in music videos.

@Necra
Why won't you take this crisp, new chapter, you goddamned vending machine?!

@Screaming Tears
There has to be an antagonist. So now it's a magic fro of evil.

@BGRIERSON
I didn't even realize how adorable I made that scene until I reread it.

@Hopeless Ruby
JESUS WOMAN WHY!
(Im mad but not horribly mad you're writing is just so amazing and I'm getting lots of emotions.)

Oh shitty fuckin fuck Gerard

Update soon plz?!

@Hopeless Ruby

For along time I only liked like 3 songs on Julian's solo but after I listened to it over again a few months ago I realized how good it is. I'm still not too into the 11th Dimension video but... you know how it is.... :)