I'm not the best when it comes to punctuation, but I do try. I need someone to add more descriptive detail in the story. Ex. How someone looks or acts , what the scene of a room looks like, or smut detail. I generally try to make my chapters medium length,but I kinda slack out when it comes to important detail and I really need help with that. Another thing is I forget about some characters.
Ex. I'll say a character is sitting on the couch in the beginning of the chapter (like a mom or dad) but Then at the end two different characters (mainly Frank and Gee) will end up pounding each others brains out on the couch. That's a problem.
I'm not the best when it comes to punctuation, but I do try.
I need someone to add more descriptive detail in the story. Ex. How someone looks or acts , what the scene of a room looks like, or smut detail.
I generally try to make my chapters medium length,but I kinda slack out when it comes to important detail and I really need help with that.
Another thing is I forget about some characters.
Ex. I'll say a character is sitting on the couch in the beginning of the chapter (like a mom or dad) but Then at the end two different characters (mainly Frank and Gee) will end up pounding each others brains out on the couch. That's a problem.
Will anyone help my poor soul?
1/26/16