LOVE-NAP rewrite

It's so fucking dark and wet today. The rain has been beating down like nothing else all day and the whole school has even had a power cut!
I feel a little like I'm walking through some sort of horror movie at the minute, I chuckle to myself.
You can only see the shadows of people in the long dark halls, and I admit I like how spooky it looks. With the occasional rumble of thunder outside, really giving the place some sort of sick, dramatic effect.
I drop my bag pack and fumble with my locker keys, straining my eyes in order to find the lock.
As soon as I unlock my locker, a bunch off books fall out onto me and onto the floor, causing me to fall back onto my arse on the school's rock hard flooring.
"Fuck." I mumble to myself, getting up off of the floor. I brush myself off in embarrassment.
I hear a small chuckle from behind me and turn around to see Gerard Way watching me.
I fucking hate that kid. He's such a creep, yet he is so popular, especially with the ladies. I'm not sure how he does it. We used to be best friends but then I told him I was bisexual and it all kinda went downhill from there...
He flashes a white grin at me and turns the other way to face his locker, well that's what I saw anyway could be wrong as IT'S SO FUCKING DARK IN HERE!!

I pick my books up and put some back into my locker, realising I am already late for class so I hurry along to corridor to Math. I rush down the dark corridor as the thunder echoes through from an open window, I run down the corridor of course, falling over once again. Probably from the rain making floors slippery when kids trample it all in. Or there's just a wet floor sign I can't see or something. "Fucks sake not again" I whine to myself, I crawl up from my ass, oblivious to the world around me until suddenly I feel too big hands grab me by the waist and throw me back onto the ground, before I can scream someone hits me over the head with a hockey stick, I suddenly feel woozy and drift off into a deep sleep.

Notes

I've decided to rewrite an old fic I wrote so I'm pretty excited about that!
Let me know your thoughts in the comments :D :D