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You're Beautiful to me

Chapter 1

Frank’s POV:
Walking in on Monday into the school to go to my first class as I was already late I see this really cute guy he had flaming red hair that was about shoulder length he was wearing black skinny jeans and a smashing pumpkins shirt and he was taller than me , who isn’t taller than me, he was with the principle Mr Urie I couldn’t help but stare at him, he was beautiful then realizing that Mr Urie was talking to me I started listening “Ahh frank the person I wanted to see, this is Gerard he’s new she just moved here since he’s in most of your classes would you be able to show him around” “um ..Yeah okay I guess “I was secretly excited but I didn’t want them noticing so I tried to act normal, when we were done talking to Mr Urie we started walking to second period as we missed first, we were walking in awkward silence so I started talking “Sooo…tell me about yourself, Gerard” “Well I just moved here as you know Because my mum got a job offer at the hospital here so she took it, I live with my mum and dad and younger brother Mikey, Mikey is very similar to me , I enjoy art a lot and I like singing, what about you ” “Oh okay, well I live with my mum my dad left when I was very little so I don’t remember him, ugh im an only child I play guitar, im not good at art, and I enjoy anything to do with music and I’m Bisexual ” he didn’t seem to bother about me being bisexual, we just reached the door to our class as we had art first so we walked in and sat at the back of the room, our teacher Mr Beirsack came in a couple minutes later he introduced Gerard to the class, Gerard looked very nervous , and cute, we had to come up with a comic strip as we were put in pairs I was relieved to find out I was put with him, as he said he could draw and he really could when we were done we looked at the finished product and it was great he put so much detail in everything, the bell went so we packed up our stuff and headed out to break to find my friends ray and bob, I found the instantly sitting in our usual spot away from everyone else, I introduced Gerard to them and found they got along great, Gerard left for a couple minutes to find his brother Mikey, he had only been gone for a second before bob said something I wasn’t paying attention as I was watching Gerard walk away “wait what I wasn’t listening” “haha I know you were too busy staring at Gerard, I was just telling ray here that I think you have a crush on a little someone named Gerard” “what.. No I don’t, why would you think that” “the way you were staring at him it was weird, I’ve seen that look before and it’s the look of you having a crush” before I could say anything Gerard came around the corner with his brother, they didn’t look much alike he was also tall kind of lanky and wore glasses, Gerard Introduced Mikey to us all “This is Mikey my Brother he’s basically another version of me but a nerd” we all laughed and Mikey started talking and mentioned he plays bass and then I realized that we needed a bass player and a singer for our band and since we got along with Gerrard and Mikey I decided to ask if they wanted to join. “Oh you play bass”, “yeah I’ve been playing it for a couple years now” “cool umm... I have this band that me and ray and bob made and we need a bass player and a singer so would you and Gerard be interested in joining” “Um, Sure why not” Mikey and Gerard said excitedly in unison “haha well, great and you two are very alike” “haha yeah we do that a lot” Gerard said, I had no doubt that Gerard wouldn’t be amazing at singing, we talked about it till end of lunch and we had to go to class.
Skipping to end of day around 3:30
Whilst walking out the gate with Gerard I asked him where he lived to see if we lived near each other “So Gerard ahh not to be creepy or anything but where do you live” “haha I live on Cutler Street” “oh really so do I” we walked to our street and I soon found out he lived right across the road from me “oh you live right across from me” “yeah I suppose so , well that’s good I guess at least I know I won’t have to walk to school loner” “yeah should come in handy when I need your nerdy brother to do my homework “ he knew I was joking and joined in laughing ,we exchanged numbers then we said goodbye to each other before going to our own houses I watched him walk into his house before walking in mine, god was he cute, I realized bob may have been right when he said I had a crush on Gerard, I went to my room and listened to music, Black Sabbath to be exact , I decided to text Gerard after saving his number to my phone

To: Gerard, Sent: 4:30pm

Hey Its Frank, How was your first day.

From: Gerard, Received: 4:31pm
It was great thanks for asking, I’m glad I met you, ray and bob otherwise it may have been shit.

He replied almost instantly like he was waiting for me to text him and I got a bit excited knowing he may have been waiting for me to text him. Yes I defiantly like Gerard there was no doubt about it, but I didn’t know if he was gay or straight or bi and I didn’t want to ruin this friendship as we had just met today so I didn’t think about it after that , we kept talking for a while and by a while I mean a couple hours we had a lot in common, we liked the same bands we both loved shopping at hot topic we liked the same type of comics and everything, it was getting late so we said our goodnights to each other and agreeing to meet each other outside the next morning to we could walk together to school along with Mikey.

Notes

this is my first fan fic, please tell me what you think or if it sucks so i can stop xx

Comments

@Frerard Forever
I started out writing the same way, until someone clued me in.. Now I pay more attention to punctuation, and I have lots more subscribers.
cant wait to read more of this fic.
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@Gee'sCLUELESSgirl!
okay thank you for the help , now that i look at it it would help with that i didnt realise how little punctuation i had xx

Frerard Forever Frerard Forever
3/23/16

I like the story idea, but you need to use more punctuation.. full stops for example!.. It will make it easier to read, instead of it looking like one giant sentence.
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