the black parade.

I looked over at Lilly, my eyes lining with fresh tears. My heart had stopped! What if hers did too? She new exactly what I was thinking. After running off to her room, she came back crying her eyes out. I new instantly that her heart had stopped too.
"So, what now?" Charlie asked, sitting cross-legged on the floor. Putting my hand to my chin, as I normally did when I was deep in thought, I hummed to myself. "I'm not really sure." I answered honestly."I think we're aloud to leave now our hearts have stopped."
we all looked at eachover, then at the doorway, which isnt that far from the exit. "Shall we try leaving?" Agatha asked, excitedly. We all nodded and, taking Lillie's hand, I followed the other two, who new where they were going.

~~~~~time lapse~~~~~
Outside, the air was fresh and breath worthy. I still haven't worked out why ghosts and spif it's would need to breath, but still, the air felt wonderful in my lungs. Deciding to try and carm her down, I took Lilly to the closest tree and sat down under it. To my surprise, I could still touch it, so I leant back against it.
Lilly handed me her fairytale book that she'd been carrying around. "Read me my favourate." Was alls she said.
I opened the book to a picture of a young man in a hospital bed, slowly dying. The boy had his hand raised up as all the nurses gathered around him. In the distance (to the right of the picture) there was a parade, the same parade the boy went to as a little boy. Clearing my throat, I began the story.
"As the man took his last breath," I read," he headed the soft tune of the parade. He held out his hand, reaching for his farther, who he saw in the distance." I stopped for a second, only to get elbowed in the ribs to continue. "As the lights went out, the walls fell and he was there, stand in front of the parade, the black parade!" I told her. I heard Lilly sigh contently, snuggling into me.
As I continued, I felt a sudden change in the air, as if someone was telling us to go away.

CHARLIE'S P.O.V
As we looked around, me and my sister, Agatha, felt a creepy and sudden change in the air. I didn't like it, not one bit. And by the look on Johnny's face, she didn't either.
"Let's go and find Becksie and Lilly and be on the move." Agatha said. Did she really mean it? We come walk away from this place and never come back?
As we begun to discuss wear we were gonna go, we heard a sharp scream, coming from the direction that Becksie and Lilly had gone. There's no way I'm losing anyone from our group now, so before anyone could speak, I was off like a shout to see what had happened.

Notes

Heeelllloooo my beautiful black parade marchers,
I still haven't come up with my evil enemies yet, so I've decide that you guys can do it for me if you like. I need three bad guys two boys, one girl. So find photos and then send them to me through message, along with their names and details about them. Whoever comes up with the best characters will have the prize of being a character in the story. You all do have a timer on doing this and this big completion ends in two weeks time. Tick tock.
Also, I can't thank you all enough for reading this, seeing as it is pretty bad.
Love you all loads,
Magic mayhem. Xxx