the black parade.

I sighed and watched from the doorway as doctors and nurses worked around me. I had just come into the hospital, but it was way too late. I was already dead. Although I could see that my heart was still beating, that didn't stop my spirit from leaving my body. Of course, I was stick in this stinking hospital until my heart did stop or my spirit decided to magically fly back into my body, and I don't think that's gonna happen. At least there was one good thing about all this. I was hold my mom's special fairytale book before I died, so at least I had something to read.
Maybe its best if I told you how I ended up here. Would be a good idea, wouldn't it?
Okay,so, last night, as a special treat, my mom had actually got tickets to go and see mine and my friends, Agatha, Charlie, Becksie and johnny, favourate band. The band we were going to see was smashing pumpkins. Its was gonna be like a three hour drive to get to the concert stadium, so Agatha and Charlie's dad agreed to drive us, seeing as we needed a responsible adult. I can tell you, Andy south was far from responsible adult.
After about an hour and a half of driving, Andy pulled up at a pub and told us to come in with him so we could get something to eat and drink. That's when I heard charlie whisper something about her dad getting drunk to Agatha. Hmmm, was it a coincidence that Mr south had a alcoholic past and that he had pulled up at a pub? Instead of questioning anyone about it, I took Becksie's hand and climbed out of the car. About an hour later, we all came out with a very drunk Andy south.
Johnny, being the eldest, offered to drive the rest of the way, But Mr south refused. "this is meant to be a treat for you girls, so I will be driving." He told us, getting into the drivers seat. Realizing that there was no way we could argue with him, we all got back into the car. I have to admit, I was scared.
The last thing I remember is screaming as loud as I could along with the others as Andy spun the car out of control and drove us off the side of the bridge we were on. We weren't found till the next morning. I guess mom had got worried when I didn't arrive home a 11:30pm, like I promised. Its a good thing she did.
So here we are! Me dead and my mother crying by the side of my bed. I watched as she took hold of my bodies hand and sqeezed it. "Don't worry." She smiled at my dead body. "When you wake up, we'll do lots of things together." I finally cracked. I fell to the floor screaming. "I'M NOT WAKING UP!! I'M NOT COMING BACK TO YOU MOMMY!!!!!" I yelled at her, trying everything to get her attention, but nothing worked. Mom couldn't see me. I gave up, so I decided to go and see how Becksie was doing. She might of woken up by now. I wondered out of my room and to door 562. What I saw, shocked me. Everything was quite normal, Becksie was in bed, eyes closed, so it was obvious that she hasn't woken up yet, and Becksie's older brother was beside her bed. But the thing that surprised me was that I saw Becksie standing in the corner of the room, arms crossed over her chest. As soon as she saw me, she ran over and wrapped me up in a hug. "How?? When??" I stuttered. "I left my body last night babe." She explained. "My heart stopped for a whole ten minutes, they got it working again and think I'm gonna survive."
"Same here!" Said two voice in unison behind us. We both turned to see Agatha and charlie standing in the door. We greater them with hugs and they share their stories. All in all, we each remember our last memory being the bridge.
we sat in silence for a while, when we heard a bleeeeeeeep coming from Becksie's machine that wouldn't stop. I saw Becksie's face drop. That told me that her heart had stopped. This was not good news. I got up quickly and ran back to the room I was in to find my heart had stopped too. Everyone's had stopped. So that was it. We had to leave now. But here was my important question of the day. How are we going to get to heaven?

Notes

So here you go, first chapter. Sorry about the authors note and wattnott, but one of my friends told me that she would be reading this story on here and she said she didn't like cliff hangers, so I needed to clear that up. Also, she's kinda a none violent person, so there's another reason. But the I hope you like this really crappy chapter. I still haven't thought of the evil characters for the story yet, which I will introduce once I thought of them. Let me know your thoughts and ideas. I always love positive criticism by the way. Love you all. Bye bye for now my beautiful parade marchers. Xxc