From Heaven? (Or Hell?)

As I walked into the school I looked around. There where people everywhere. I quickly walked to my locker, and entered my combination. It took a couple of tries until I just looked at it and it opened. So father didn't take away everything. I opened it and put everything in. I grabbed the stuff I needed for my first hour, which was Science, and headed over there. I was told to sit anywhere I liked. I chose the seat closest to the door. After about five minutes ten more people had walked in, including fohawk. He was probably the most interesting person in the class so far. I patiently waited for attendance to be called so I could figure out his name. Soon I figured out fohawks name was Frank Iero. It suited him. Sooner then I liked the class ended and I was the first one out. Before i knew it it was already fourth hour and everyone was eager to go to lunch. Soon the bell rang and everyone basically ran like animals to the door. Soon, after going to my locker,I realized why everyone was so quick to get in line. The lines got extremely long in a matter of seconds. I was quite glad that I didn't have to eat, because I would starve before actually getting to the front. Soon, after walking around most of the lunch area I noticed a big group of people gathering around. Curiosity got the better of me and I looked in. Two huge guys where circling a very small person. I quickly pushed my way through the crowd to see one of the guys say "Oh your so dead." And raise his fist. "I wouldn't do that." I said loudly so that the two Neanderthals would hear me. It suddenly went dead silent in the cafeteria. "And why not?" Thing #1 said. "Because, You'd be on the ground with a bloody nose before your fist got near his face." Thing #2s face got red from fury. "Says who?" Thing #1 demanded. "Says me." It was a big thing of movement next, #1 launched at me, while #2 threw a big meaty fist at the smaller boy. I quickly dodged #1 and grabbed #2s forearm. I bent #2's arm in the wrong Position and watched him yelp in pain. Soon someone yelled "Teacher!" And everyone fled in different directions. Before I knew it #1&2 where gone and it was only me and the small kid in the area. I helped him up and asked him, "Are you okay?" He quickly nodded his head, straightened his fedora, and put out his hand. "Im Patrick Stump, thanks for saving my ass back there, I would've been dead in seconds." I smiled and grabbed his hand, "I'm Gerard... Um, Way, ya Way. And it was no problem." Patrick smiled and said "So, I guess ill see you around." "Ya, bye." I quickly said, watching hi. Walk away to a group of people sitting at a table, one of them being fohawk, staring at me.

Notes

2nd Chapter :3 so I was wondering if this fic is any good? It if is just comment, rate, or subscribe. Bye :D