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You Shouldn't Have

Chapter Eleven: You'll Be Okay

We were driving out of the city behind us were several cars, I was in the back trying to resuscitate Grace, Mikey and Ray were shooting at the cars behind us, and Gerard was trying to drive us away from this fucked up Utopia. Grace was breathing, I had a pulse but we needed to get Grace to a better doctor then me. We all knew that was Doctor DeathDefy, we drove down the highway loosing the cops behind us. The cops left us when we drove into a ditch towards the old Motor Cafe, the opening wasn't locked so that meant he was still in business.
"DeathDefy!" shouted Gerard
"What the Fuck do you want Party?" he asked
"Get in here now! Grace is dying!"
The fat Doctor rushed in (he had a soft spot for Grace) he immediatly grabbed his stethoscope & started feeling her heart, Thong Bro skated in and brought something that looked like it would make Grace wake up. Grace coughed after an hour or so and fluttered her eyes open,
"What are all you guys looking at?"
I jumped up and grabbed Grace by the stomach giving her a big fat squeeze,
"Frank, I almost die and you have to go up and try and squeeze my guts out!"
I was laughing and hugging her, I turned and hugged Gerard. I knew these people like they were my actual family. I loved Grace, I loved Gerard, I loved this entire room of people.
"I'll protect you all" I thought "I promise"
THE END!

Notes

I know corny ending but you know I think it's kind of cute.

Comments

Hey People, the way I find out wat you want in the story is you need to comment! I need to know if you think it sucks, I'll fix it, If you think it needs to be longer, then by fuck, I'll make it longer!
Cry For Me Cry For Me
4/28/13
@Nikki says RAWR Thx I had a lot of time and I really love Frankie
Cry For Me Cry For Me
4/25/13
Cool :) I like it so far!
falloutlies falloutlies
4/25/13